Communication
Good plan, well executed. Very good transitions between speakers. Slides
Fine Content Good quantity, not too much repetition. Well done.
Stéphanie
You sound a bit nervous - take your time. Good fluency - watch your plural 's' and check pronunciation of key words. Good spontaneous speech.
susTAINable deVELopment
baNAna
criTERia (not criterias)
Julie
Good delivery, good intonation, easy to follow (a little confusion on Slide 10)
the following limits > further limits
a mean_ > a means
there are 8 principle_
Déborah
A little hesitant, jerky delivery - try to speak more smoothly. Try not to read slides.
helping > H
allow to give higher wages > allows us to give higher wages
Johann
You sound as though you are reading from notes or have memorized your text. Spontaneous speech is always better - you need to have more confidence.
Communication
Good plan, well executed. Very good transitions between speakers.
Slides
Fine
Content
Good quantity, not too much repetition. Well done.
Stéphanie
You sound a bit nervous - take your time. Good fluency - watch your plural 's' and check pronunciation of key words. Good spontaneous speech.
susTAINable deVELopment
baNAna
criTERia (not criterias)
Julie
Good delivery, good intonation, easy to follow (a little confusion on Slide 10)
the following limits > further limits
a mean_ > a means
there are 8 principle_
Déborah
A little hesitant, jerky delivery - try to speak more smoothly. Try not to read slides.
helping > H
allow to give higher wages > allows us to give higher wages
Johann
You sound as though you are reading from notes or have memorized your text. Spontaneous speech is always better - you need to have more confidence.
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